Broadening out slightly with some angle changes on Jim’s head in panel 2.  Obviously not a lot to do art-wise this time around but I had a heck of a time with Jim’s dialogue in the last panel.  I even had something I kind of liked when I finished the scripting phase and when it came to putting the text in I just couldn’t move forward with it and had to retool it.  The end result I think is much more telling of both Jim and Rana.  Whereas Rana will throw random vulgar and not so vulgar words together that don’t belong together to insult you, Jim is much more thought out and deliberate and in the original script he even used the word “bullpoop” because he’s so sheltered and controlled by his mother.